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persona unica¿¿ única??
¿una persona única?
uhm es interesante aquella palabra,
la cual dice muchas cosas,
¿porque digo interesante?
pues lastimosamente esta
palabra es muy poco común,
en esta sociedad de hipocresía, falsedad y superficialidad.

la persona que se atreva a ser única, aquella persona, es muy valiente
¿porque?,pues,no se como decirlo,en pocas palabras.

una persona única es aquella que
tiene un diferente pensamiento que los demás, aquella persona
puedes ser mejor que los demás.

todos alguna vez fuimos únicos, pero la triste realidad es que
gracias a que todos, estoy diciendo todos, alguna vez tuvimos el deseo
de que esta sociedad nos aceptara

Strainbreaking face
rolling around with misery
listening voices
tears bleed
flowing hearts
blocked dreams
locked screams
what is seems
who believes
count the weeks
lonely
songs brings
heartless things
thoughtless mean
Crying me
Focus please
Catch means
Death
Swallowing breath
Shallow help
look in the well
Zero tale
Zero tell
Burning hell
Fail
Abandon shell
All of us are here

Snow Queen

She's not reacting to anyone's love,
She always stays cold,
She loves to be in snow,
And no one knows what she's capable of,
She's always alone,
She's a master of her snow world.

She's called Snow Queen,
She's always so mean,
Happiness makes her sick,
It makes her weak,
But the Queen holds on,
With the power of snow.

The Queen rules the Kingdom,
She knows the meaning of freedom,
A lot of people tried to change her,
But they became frozen,
She wants to stay away,
She don't want anyone to get in her way.

It's War!It's War!

It's war, when the father gets up in his holidays by 5 clock.
When he enters his service for the family like everyone else.
When he just attacks the pool-landscape of the Normadie.
When he raised his flag to mark his capture area.
He and 500 others.

It's war, when she attacks the discounts.
When she search for the armed conflict between her girlfriends.
When she capture ressources, she didn't need.
When she also brings scarped knees with her new summer skirt home.
She and 500 others.

It's war, when the whole humans loose their heads.
We and

Ta osobaTo osoba kochana
i powszechnie szanowana.
Wiek jej... Się nie liczy.
Serce ma jakby wyrwane z Zawiszy.
Nigdy Cię nie zawiedzie, ale doradzi.
Niebawem jej święto, więc prezencik mamy.
To ten skromny wierszyk i kilka drobiazgów.
Bo Twe serce jest pełne drobiazgów, Mamo. c:

Hey guys...You want to know a secret?hey...when people ask hows it going? or whats up? or how ya been? do they actually care how you've been?

I don't think even 50% of them care.

they have their own problems. As do I. However, I'm part of the fifty percent that would rather listen to other peoples issues instead of mine. Instead of doing homework or listen to teachers in school or do something people "Believe" is important to graduate high school. I would rather help someone. Do something more important.

Honestly... I think high school is a waste of time. Why can't high school be classes that would actually teach you what you "need" to know? cause honestly if I want to become

InsomniacI lie here awake.
With every breath
I take,
I notice my chest
Is heavy and
My heart feels burdened
And empty...

Why do I feel this way?
Will someone please come
Take this pressure and
Pain away?
Or will I have to
Suffer through this night
With stiff and tense muscles
That ache?

I toss and turn and fight
All through
This sleepless night.
But why?
I don't know...
I feel like an
Empty shell.

Yes, empty because
I feel like
I have been exposed;
And my soul has fled.

Could I be dead?
Or is this all in my head?

I still toss and turn
And fight all through
This sleepless night.
Someone please
Rescue me...
From all these
Nightmare-ish dreams;

1Tienes el mismo repertorio y las mismas actitudes para cada persona que se topa en tu camino?, sera acaso el mismo inesperado final para cada amorío estúpido?

Juegas con fuego,
deja de tocar las puertas del infierno,
algún día abrirán, y seras devorada por tu misma boca.

.:Vent-Drown:.I feel like I can't breathe,
Making me become a monster I can't see.
Down I continue to sink,
Really feeling useless dying the water in my tears of ink,
Overly emotional,
Well I've lost my sanity, I've lost it all;
Never will I be able to swim back up,
I can't see the sun,
Never will I get to see it anymore, because I'm....
Gone

*.Quietly:Vent.*Im quietly living,
despite the pain inside.
I'm silently listening,
letting the knife pain subside.
I'm slowly bleeding much like a drought,
yet no one has seemed,
to figure this out.
Forced to live and suffer in this eerie silence,
only.....
only listening to this broken heart of mine's fading beating.

Thank You MomYou were with me, when I cried,
You were telling truth, when I lied,
You're my biggest proud,
I could even scream it loud,
Now I know, what to say,
I know how to pray.

I want to thank you Mom,
For everything you have done,
You showed me right things,
Thank you for giving me wings,
You were saving my life,
In the moments I wanted to die.

You were going with me to Doc,
You were showing me support,
When I was doing something bad,
You've never been mad,
You gave me a lot of love,
Love, and even more.

Than you Mom.
For everything.

Mereces.Resultaste ser en carne propia lo que odiabas de las anteriores mentes mediocres que cruzaron mi camino, ahora no te queda mas que atarte una cuerda al cuello, recuerda esas personas te enferman, ahora pruebas lo que odias y ahora eres tu la persona enferma, así que deja las excusas deja las mentiras, deja toda esa estúpida saliva gastada en vano, solo muere, sin metáforas ni nada no mereces ni la tinta con la que escribo para mi placer de odio, sin embargo lo hago por que mejor medicina que esta para mi no hay.

RotosYa no soy la persona que solía ser, aquel naufrago que nunca se dio por vencido en las islas perdidas, a todo le encontraba una dosis de emoción.
Ahora solo camino encobrado mis pasos son lentos y tediosos, una espora letal mas jodida que el mismo veneno entro en mi y esa enfermedad tiene nombre..

Horario muertoEsas manecillas de reloj que tornan lentas en tus horas de agonía, como una tortura para tu cráneo, yo no entiendo.

Tienes todo no eres feliz,

tienes poco no eres feliz.

Entonces escarbe dentro de mi, y encontré algo llamado;
"detalles".

Sean efímeros, sean perpetuos..

Broken HeartDaggers shine
Disguised like harmless arrows
From cupids quiver

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YOU ARE BEAUTIFULBeauty in it simplicity
Lives in the heart of few
Unhindered by pressure that the glow may be
Evident in the lives of people like me

ThoughtsI wonder why I am spun to write when I am lowly and depress
I wonder why I write better when things gets bad for me
I wonder…I wonder…..

I wonder why God cease performing miracles of the ancient days
I wonder if God has lost His love for this generation
I wonder if He’s sad with what’s He’s creation has become

I wonder if race has anything to do with the way we reason as individuals
I wonder why our expression of love differs
I wonder why I feel unaccepted

I wonder what purpose my life is on earth
I wonder what will become of me in the next 50 years
I wonder if life will be fair to me
I wonder

I wonder what has become of this world
I wonder why we stop caring about each other
I wonder….I wonder

I WILL OBEYI wont call again
What else is it you don't like
Let me know
I don't want to learn from my mistake
Cos your punishment far outweigh my errors
You do to me things a hatred filled man does to his enemy
I feel so sad today
Couldn't function properly
Couldn't pray for a call and a dirty response
You said you will never hurt me
but with the distance you succeeded
Show me your boundaries
I can live by your rules
The joy of knowing you far outweigh one day's judgment
I am not expecting you to be perfect
I only need to understand you
Be gentle with me and teach me
And I will obey
No one has given me much joy as you do
No one has made me feel special as you
No one has shown me much love as you
I don't want to lose you
For one day's mistake

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by ~fibernite, Nov 20, 2012, 1:29:12 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Concrete Poetry

Can I do this?
I'm afraid
I know it will trill you
but i am frighten to be criticize

What we share is not for the world
but for our lonely two hearts which beat as one
Are you smiling?
I wish you are

This the worst position to put me
but if it pleases you i will gladly do
If it will undo my mistakes
i hope it does

Your critic i look out for
even if i get none
yours is more than enough
I hope you will forgive me

I'm afraid
Here you are drawing me out of my shell
This is the most difficult thing I've ever done for you
I hope you appreciate it

I am not a poet
I cant be any close as good to anyone here
but i become a poet for you tonight
if it will undo all my wrongs

I hope it makes you happy
I hope it brings smile to your face
I hope it dissolves your anger towards me
I hope you will forgive me

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For deejani with love

. I am very sorry

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*bluedragoneye Nov 21, 2012

When we pour ourselves into words we can never go wrong
for a poet is emotions pure raw be it love be it fear be it pain sorrow hate
there is no wrong way to dance words.....for all the world to see and feel that we are here that we are real

your words are you it’s not easy to show our true selves to the world but you did it and now you too know how to dance feel the music for it is your words your dancing partner your pen so dance and be free to move across this sea of white sheets sail on little poet ..........you are the ship your sails are woven dreams the wind that fills you is the world........... may you sail not only in claim seas, but rough ones as well...........BDE

~fibernite Nov 22, 2012

you made me so happy

and i am wondering if you are a male or a female. Reasons:
The message you left for me i felt they were more than good enough to posted but here they are all for me

when i saw how lengthy it was i found myself smiling

....it made me happy even before i read it

and lastly you added my poem, last nite i was regretted posting it because it made no impact more so, the person i wrote it for didn't deem it fit to respond.

You marked it as favourite

what a thrill. Thanks a lot

*bluedragoneye Nov 22, 2012

Aw I am glad it made you feel good for
it was my intent to do so

if they are not your watcher did you comment
to them giving them a link to it?

if not please do so for if they do not watch
and know it’s for them they may not have known
but if link them and they did not reply sad on them
but do not let that stop you ok
it has happen to me many of times and yes it is very
hurting but shake it off and move on.....

stand taller and smile for soon you will find
someone to dance words for and they will read and love
that you are speaking to them

I am female but it does not matter gender to speak
to another’s soul it only takes kindness and the willingness
to reach out to another and say take my hand and lets’ dance
words...........Dance on soul sister for we love life and we love to dance

~fibernite Nov 23, 2012

Awwwwwww, you are just too sweet

what more can i say...thank you
very much.

*bluedragoneye Nov 23, 2012

you are most welcome wishing you love and luck

~fibernite Nov 23, 2012

thank you

*bluedragoneye Nov 24, 2012

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